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Hello! My name is Poetic, I am a young inspiring writer and author who intends on building my fan base. I have been writing poetry for almost 8 years now and I believe I have come a long way. With the support from you and God, I believe that all is possible! Lets make the impossible possible and never doubt a purpose, cause everything can be an achievement! I appreciate you appreciating me. So grab a seat where its comfortable, relax but don't let your mind wander too far of into a distant; I may not get you back. This is a place where you can put your mind at ease and base your opinions while I base mine. Enjoy! Welcome to the beginning! -Poetic

Sunday, October 4, 2009

Is Perfection in Existence?

In our moments of pain and deep depression, there usually is someone you can contact that is able to ease your pain and bring you to a state of relief. Some rather than others; have a few more to call on. No matter the head count, as long as a shadowy figure is there to bring you back to your sanity when you can't, when all else fails; makes the process worth the sacrifice of patiently waiting! Though we are never given more then we can bare, this world has hit many in the head with characteristics of false assumptions, thinking we were made weak enough to believe that the baggage we hold are far more heavier then majority. We were not equipped with this mentality from the day God made us, but consumed it from actions and exaggerated experiences gathered by friends and foe. We encounter this kind of ignorance everyday, but what can be the perfect remedy of relief that is able to cast out this spell to reassure ourselves? Somewhere, were we can find a place of solitude, a mark of hope, a generation of purity and admiration, a strong-hold during your stormy nights...........A Perfect Home, A Perfect Family! A Perfect Life! Does this exist? You tell me.............


Yours Truly;
Poetic P

"Though many are firm and seemingly unbeatable, theres always something more stronger and powerful.....look to the hills!"

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4 comments:

  1. There is no such thing as the ideal perfect family, home, or life. I think it varies among us and this is what people fail to realize nowadays. What one person thinks is perfect might be the total opposite from someone else, and this is the cause of conflict among people today. You bring out great ideas and honestly not a lot of people actually sit down and analyze things like this when they should. Good job =)

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  2. To achieve perfection is impossible and to maintain a perfect is also impossible. You want your son/daughter to experience the times that brought us to depression so they can develop morals and know what is right and wrong. You ever saw that segment on the fresh prince of bel-air when will had that dream that he had the perfect wife and perfect kids and realized that he was in a nightmare because everything is just so boring, you want to go through the adventure with your kids and raise them so they can have memories about how they made it through rough times. Same with your wife, personally I can't have a girlfriend who is like 100% me, its very boring and doesn't bring new things into the table except sex, ass n titties. You want to live a happy life with a fulfilling family and grow old to see your kids with their kids and so on but to make it perfect? no you will be bored.

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  3. Just when I think you cant get more amazing you prove me wrong...you are incredible...words cant even describe!

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  4. also i agree with both of the comments above! They are both soo right!

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