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Hello! My name is Poetic, I am a young inspiring writer and author who intends on building my fan base. I have been writing poetry for almost 8 years now and I believe I have come a long way. With the support from you and God, I believe that all is possible! Lets make the impossible possible and never doubt a purpose, cause everything can be an achievement! I appreciate you appreciating me. So grab a seat where its comfortable, relax but don't let your mind wander too far of into a distant; I may not get you back. This is a place where you can put your mind at ease and base your opinions while I base mine. Enjoy! Welcome to the beginning! -Poetic

Saturday, November 7, 2009

Thoughts of growth.

As we astingush our pain upon a vessle of innocence and disregard all sympathetic ways

Then as negligent as we are

Do we disregard beyond our own dismays?

As valuable our thoughts can be

Our silent tongues discourage each idea

We know dreams form too reality

So evidently is it evolution we fear?

Poetic

Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Venting

Whats on my mind lately?

I must apologize, lately I have been at a stand still with poetry, reading, blogging, even relationship/fellowship wise. I assume the purpose for my selfish venting; I am calling it, is to cater for some "me" time. You see, I suffer from constant mood swings, which I can connect to the crisis at hand. Unfortunately some naive people believe we live in a perfect world, with a perfect economy, with a perfect social class, but I am here to try and wake your minds up as my mind has been awaken. Tuition hikes, low job opportunities, TAP being taking away from youths trying to maintain a education in a world of ignorant minds, Health care, a overly populated environment with not enough room and board, these are just a few of the problems we face in society today.

  1. Are they're any topics you feel needs to be addressed?
  2. What is something you feel is of great value to vent on?
Do share!!

I'm sure many are reading this, expecting a poem to relay in the depths of my thoughts, maybe even a haiku hidden somewhere to describe in laymen terms, my motives. I am sorry for the inconvenience to the minorities. I vent in poetry, and spoken word, each doing the same relief for me; expression. A real poets means of getting his/her words/thoughts across.....(If you are looking for my latest poetry; be sure too read "My Last Stand")

There are many ways in which one can vent, mine is through poetry and also releasing it in blogging.
  1. How do you vent?
  2. How often do you vent?
I look forward to reading your feedback!
Thanks for reading and being a supporter of my work!
God Bless;
Poetic


Monday, October 19, 2009

My Last Stand!


Regrets pounder deeply within my soul
Questioning my purpose
Love rejects each sin when hate takes whole
So tell me am I worth it?

Ideas crushing through my head
Back and forth as I go
Shall I yeild to the road ahead
For love is the only path I know

Mistakes and blames resting upon my chipped shoulder
Play tolls on me everyday
Shall a weaking burden last till I get older
Or shall disregard against my dismays

Powerful miracles of hate
Seem to bash thoughts of loved ones
But what I had was something beyond great
But instead pain is why I run

Either you erase me and burden my heart no more with question
Or to free me as a bird trapped in fog
Cause no torment can force this lesson
For I am coveteted by God.

Poetic© (A different me, is because its a different you)

A Moment of Peace!


In these times, we are faced with numerous attacks from all angles of the table. No on seems to be there to counter these attacks in your defense. No one seems to be there to give you a fair warning of these assualtants that have come to threaten your state. But yet you progress, despite the intergrity you might have lost and pride that may have depleted in this blind battle. You form an alliance, one in which has deserved the sole name "Brothers in arms"(Westport/A.M.P).....a safe house...a home.........a family. Throughout many locations in the world you've noticed that your stable and growth is inevitable. No rumours, no lies, no disappointments.....a safe haven in a world filled with disaster.
There comes a time in your disappointments, to be revealed through forshadow and weed out any poisnous thoughts and mimics whose sole desire is to breach and break your foundation of familys. In doing so you hurt some that you loved that were not intended to be inflicted by this mishap. Unfortunately your still around that table with angles unprotected, so miscommunication is prone to occur. In your quiet storm of release, you notice problems begin to splurge throughout the innocence of your name and the names of the halo carriers. Your figure is brought down, but yet respect is still intended in your hours of shame, for those who look up to you. How do you redeem your composer?
Confusion brings forth doubt in many of your indecisive decesions...hence being indecisive. Please let us not inherit the past mistakes and mistakenly or even purposely allow them to happen and expect the effect to damage as much as it did. Responsiblities are really for the mature at heart and the ones most reasonable without judgement. So how are anyone of us so? And how do we realize who is, if we are not to judge and consider if so?
But in these days we are to care for the weak and protect our minds from the corrupt, even if so you believe they have been distingushed and discarded. A redemption is needed, because judgement shouldnt rest where responbility sleeps.......... Finally can we have a moment of peace.
Poetic

Sunday, October 4, 2009

Is Perfection in Existence?

In our moments of pain and deep depression, there usually is someone you can contact that is able to ease your pain and bring you to a state of relief. Some rather than others; have a few more to call on. No matter the head count, as long as a shadowy figure is there to bring you back to your sanity when you can't, when all else fails; makes the process worth the sacrifice of patiently waiting! Though we are never given more then we can bare, this world has hit many in the head with characteristics of false assumptions, thinking we were made weak enough to believe that the baggage we hold are far more heavier then majority. We were not equipped with this mentality from the day God made us, but consumed it from actions and exaggerated experiences gathered by friends and foe. We encounter this kind of ignorance everyday, but what can be the perfect remedy of relief that is able to cast out this spell to reassure ourselves? Somewhere, were we can find a place of solitude, a mark of hope, a generation of purity and admiration, a strong-hold during your stormy nights...........A Perfect Home, A Perfect Family! A Perfect Life! Does this exist? You tell me.............


Yours Truly;
Poetic P

"Though many are firm and seemingly unbeatable, theres always something more stronger and powerful.....look to the hills!"

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Saturday, October 3, 2009

Welcome Supporters.

Hello! My name is Poetic Popular (The real Poetic); For a while now I was dwelling on making myself noticed so that I can excel more into my work, but unfortunately I procrastinated so much that I never got time for it. Today is the day where it all stops! I've been inspired by numerous people that given me the courage, to allow myself, to allow my readers the understanding behind my motives and the reasons of my creative thoughts. Hence the reason why I have created this blog cite. As any hopeful person expects, is to intend on getting positive feedback about, my poetry, my thoughts, and also my highly open-minded views. Though its never that easy, there are negative individuals out there that post negative opinions, but I am very open to any type of view, because without it; I am without knowledge. I am to humble to receive anything at this early stage of my success. So I take this time to Welcome you to my blog cite, hopefully you will enjoy and feel comfortable by my posts. I can also be followed on Twitter: PoeticPopular, and Contacted on Gmail: Therealpoetic@gmail.com. Feel free to having a good time!





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Yours Truly,


Poetic

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