Regrets pounder deeply within my soul
Questioning my purpose
Love rejects each sin when hate takes whole
So tell me am I worth it?
Ideas crushing through my head
Back and forth as I go
Shall I yeild to the road ahead
For love is the only path I know
Mistakes and blames resting upon my chipped shoulder
Play tolls on me everyday
Shall a weaking burden last till I get older
Or shall disregard against my dismays
Powerful miracles of hate
Seem to bash thoughts of loved ones
But what I had was something beyond great
But instead pain is why I run
Either you erase me and burden my heart no more with question
Or to free me as a bird trapped in fog
Cause no torment can force this lesson
For I am coveteted by God.
Poetic© (A different me, is because its a different you)
im feelin dis poem it relates 2 me i undastand never let mistakes burden u erase dem or theyll take ova ur lyfe *Zeus*
ReplyDeleteThanks for the support man!
ReplyDeleteI like this poem a lot P! I am soooo happy that you are still writing.
ReplyDeleteSpeaking the truth in this poem babes, I hope all who reads it and understands what is being said and apply to their lives. Proud of u hun, keep doing ur thing babes!
ReplyDeletei jus wish a lot of people applied material like this to the necessary areas...we gotta do better..Gaza mih seh..lmao
ReplyDeleteyo i posted a comment already but i guess it didnt go through
ReplyDeleteyour the only one that can get me to read a poem or read period so all i can say is good job and keep doing what you do, the poem was amazing! [its not like you needed to hear that]
honestly i really love this poem. it relates to alot of us and what we go through with either our significant others or family. you are a great writer and its like everything i'm thinking is in your poem. =]
ReplyDeleteOmqq Its madd qood. Imma hang it on my wall =]
ReplyDeleteive always like this poem. you can see the passion through your words and the pain behind it. You never really know what burdens life will bring you and you never really know if you will get passed them but whats for sure love is always good and keep faith in god is the best way to go.
ReplyDeletei like this poem amigo... but i think it could have been better... i have seen better work from u... im scared to post this cz im sure someone is goin to come at my head... it was really good but i know you can do better!!<3
ReplyDeleteI haven't had the chance to read any of your work in a while. But I must say that I am highly impressed! I loved the poem. Keep up the good work love. I look forward to reading some more from you. :)
ReplyDeleteOmg babe this poem was amazing! I felt like I was feeling everything you were feeling. Im really happy you wrote this because I feel like I can relate and i know a lot of other people can to!You inspire me and you have a lot of Talent so keep showin it off babe and keep doin your thing. You are gunna make it far so never give up on your dreams!
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